Wednesday, September 12, 2012

Imitating Kincaid: A Rant About Rights

"That the native does not like the tourist is not hard to explain.  For every native of every place is a potential tourist, and every tourist is a native of somewhere.  Every native lives a life of overwhelming and crushing banality and boredom and desperation and depression, and every deed, good and bad, is an attempt to forget this.  Every native would  like to find a way out, every native would like a rest, every native would like a tour.  But some natives - most natives in the world - cannot go anywhere.  They are too poor.  They are too poor to go anywhere.  They are too poor to escape the reality of their lives; and they are too poor to live properly in the place where they live, which is the very place you, the tourist, want to go - so you, they envy your ability to leave your own banality and boredom, they envy your ability to turn their own banality and boredom into a source of pleasure for yourself."  --A Small Place by Jamaica Kincaid (18, 19)


Long ago we were promised that in America each person has the same rights and freedoms. It is apparent that even now and despite numerous struggles from minorities, there are still groups without certain rights. Despite the infamous words of the Declaration which promise the right to the pursuit of happiness, there are still those who, despite the promise our forefathers made, try to take this right from others.  Every person should have the right to be happy, the right to live their lives, the right to love the person of their choice.  But this fundamental right – that of happiness and life – is forbidden to homosexuals.  They are outcasts. They are shunned by friends and family alike.  Even strangers on the street may taunt or jeer at them; there are many cases where an individual from any one of these groups has harmed a young homosexual, many cases where the outcast has been teased, has been beaten, some to death – these pariahs, thrown from home and from social group to walk alone, are treated nearly subhumanly by those with the misguided belief that to love whom you love is wrong and should be punished.

3 comments:

  1. I really like this blog! I found it very powerful for two reasons. The first reason is that your topic is a hot issue today and you present it very clearly and meaningfully. The second reason would be the imitation of Kincaid's style. Just as in the original passage Kincaid is making her point about the poverty of many of the locals, you convey a strong about civil rights and equality for homosexuals. You definitely did an excellent job using Kincaid's "ranting" style to push your message onto the reader. Well Done!

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  2. Wow. This blog is spot on! I for one agree with the topic whole-heartedly, but the way you translated this blog from Kincaid is phenomenal. Like all of her sentences, they are very very long, and yet when I read this, there was so much fluidity in the way you put it together. You had a very clear issue, and you tackled it at the heart, along with several examples. I also admire your diction. Though what I liked most was that you are fighting for more freedom, whereas Kincaid has to an extent lost hope in humanity.

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  3. Loved this blog Brealt! Even though for the assignment you had to borrow a sentence structure and try to make it your own, it is able to flow very well. Your message was very powerful for the minimal amount of words in which it was contained. Your tone is very clear and strong in explaining your point.

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