In my personal experience at high school, students push
themselves beyond their fullest potential and often work themselves past the
point of illness because they’re afraid that by taking a day off they’ll fall
behind in their classes.
I’m included in this
group of overworked students. To be
fair, I really bring the stress on myself due to heavy courseloads and the
choice I made to attend school over 20 miles from my house, although my busy
schedule isn’t unique to myself. According
to psychologytoday.com, “1/3 of children reported experiencing physical
symptoms that are frequently associated with stress.”* These teens sleep less so that they can study
more; if they get back the essay or the test and the grade doesn’t live up to
their standards (realistic or not), the teen may plummet into feelings of hopelessness
which are often followed by a renewed effort towards their schoolwork. This can result in even less sleep, and
therefore has a negative effect on physical health.
The problem of declining physical health is a problem in
many different ways. The first is that
it makes concentrating more difficult, so grades start to slip and more
pressure to do well next time is added. The
second is in taking a day off to recover; many students are worried that if
they’re out too often they’ll end up with too many missed days and lose credit
for a course. Personally, when I get
sick I tell myself ever day “just one more day and tomorrow I’ll stay home and
get better,” but I continue putting off a day of healing until I’m either
better or too sick to leave bed. All while
I’m denying sickness to myself, my grades fluctuate and I stay up later to do
better while getting sicker.
Health is not the only aspect of a teen’s life at risk from
the heavy pressures of high school life; a teen’s mental safety and sometimes
even his or her life is also in danger. According
to nimh.nih.gov, nearly 7 in 100,000 teens commit suicide each year (this
number makes the 15-19 age bracket the highest among young people ages 10-24)**. That may not seem like very many people, but considering
that in 2010 there were 22,040,343 teenagers in the US, those 7/100,000 add up
quickly; going by the 2010 statistic, over 1,542 teenagers committed suicide in
that year alone.***
And because the number of teenagers rises every year, if the
7/100,000 statistic is true then even more teenagers will commit suicide by the
end of 2012.
Studies show a correlation between scholastic stress and
teenage suicide; most suicides among teens occur during exams, which are
usually periods of intense stress and pressure to succeed. In cultures where both students and others put
pressure on the teens to succeed, the rate of suicide is higher. **** That’s
not to say that school is the only cause of teen suicide; merely it is a
significant one.
If we want to protect our teens, we need to relieve some of
the pressure that causes them to crack.
*http://www.psychologytoday.com/blog/teen-angst/201109/teen-stress-how-much-is-too-much
**http://www.nimh.nih.gov/health/publications/suicide-in-the-us-statistics-and-prevention/index.shtml#children***http://www.census.gov/prod/cen2010/briefs/c2010br-03.pdf (page 4)
**** http://mres.gmu.edu/pmwiki/uploads/Main/schoolMED2010.pdf (page 2)
Sarah, you did a great job with this post! You balanced statistics and facts while managing to get your point across earnestly and with a strong voice. You also related it back to yourself and your experience, which added to the overall impact of the post. Your logic is very strong here, and many would find it difficult to argue with. I can completely identify with what you're writing about, which shows you took the audience into consideration:specifically, high school students who take at least one AP class. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteOne of the most remarkable abilities of this post is the way in which it reels you in. From the first sentence, I want to read more! You infused just the right amount of statistics without it getting boring and gave plenty of examples, all while retaining your voice. Personally, this post is extremely relatable for me. I've already taken a "mental health" day to organize my priorities and schoolwork. It really is a terrible issue, and I'm glad you've highlighted its negativity with your lovely writing tone!
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